Week Six

Greetings! This week is an oddball week. Tuesday is technically on a Monday schedule, but it is not on a Monday schedule at LaGuardia, where I teach a class at the same time as our class. The LaGuardia semester only just started, and if you remember how “fun” it was to start the semester online you can imagine how much they need a live presence answering their questions right now. Do not worry, though. We have a productive week ahead of us. This week, I’m asking you to do at least one of the following video lessons and activities. Each short video has an activity meant to help you revise your last draft of Essay 1 before submitting it. If you turned it in already, I hope you kept a copy! I will go into the TURN IN folder and make sure it is shared with you. You will get credit for each lesson and activity deliverable you do, but you are only required to do one, which means extra credit for you is available. Choose this option if you think you have fallen behind or have shown up to workshops without drafts to workshop.

A note about workshop: I set that time aside to give feedback on your writing. Feedback is the most useful part of this class, so I want you to have it, but if you show up to workshop without something to share I cannot give you feedback. This means it is a waste of my time. If you find yourself needing guidance, clarity, or reassurance on your writing but you have not shown up with your writing at the workshop, we have a problem. I may need to change the organization of the class and workshops to set aside time for students who have not been showing up with drafts. This would likely mean that all groups meet at the same time but only include those who have drafts, and that the length of each session would be shorter.

A note about the assignment schedule: I’m going to change things to adjust for the way things have been going. Based on how things are going so far, I believe there need to be more options for approaching the reading, more structured and purposeful instruction on the assignments, and opportunities to write-to-think in free-writes. This week, I will revise the upcoming assignment schedule to integrate these findings, and I will start requesting feedback so that you can help me teach you more effectively and usefully. A writing class is meant to be challenging, but the platform is not the challenge goal of the class!

See the lessons posted below, but first read the following announcement:

If you have not done so already, please fill out or encourage your household to fill out Census 2020.

The population numbers from the Census determine resource allocations for billions of dollars in federal funding (which New York State contributes a high amount to!) and the numbers of New York reps there are in Congress.

Here’s a link to New York’s portal to the Census: https://www.ny.gov/programs/2020-census#
And here’s more information: https://www.census.gov/programs-surveys/decennial-census/2020-census/about.html
Even if you are not a US citizen, you should fill out the Census. There are no questions about citizenship and documentation on the general Census. The information is confidential and by law cannot be shared with any other governmental agencies. The census is simply to count people so every person living here should be accounted for. Right now the estimated count in Queens is about 60%.

The deadline for Census 2020 has been extended to October 31st but please fill it out as soon as possible.

Lessons

This week, especially Tuesday, the focus is really on quoting authors effectively. There is a lot to quoting, so we will take it step by step. Complete at least one of the following lessons and its activities for credit. These lessons are essential for your Essay 1 Last Draft revisions. Each video starts with the same title introduction but they contain different, vital information about quoting effectively. Complete the lesson activities by Saturday, 11:59 p.m. to receive credit. Credit is for participation (engagement) and for process writing, so it really counts!

Here are a couple of things to make sure to include in your revised quotations no matter which lesson you choose:

  1. Introduce authors with first and last names, and follow using only the relevant author’s last name. If you are not personally friends with the author you have no business writing about them on a first name basis.
  2. Cite your sources in MLA style as much as possible. In Essay 1, this means introducing the title of the presentation you quote or paraphrase. If it is not immediately clear which presentation you’re quoting, you can include a parenthetical title citation at the end of a sentence. If you quote the article, include the page number in a parenthesis after the quotation marks.
  3. For further details about MLA citation style, both in-text and in the Works Cited area, consult the Purdue OWL site here: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide/mla_in_text_citations_the_basics.html

Link to activity:To get credit for watching this assignment, click this link to the Google Slide presentation and follow the instructions.

Link to activity: Open the Google Slides Presentation linked here and follow the instructions for the companion activity for Quoting Authors.

Week Five

Know Your Meme makes an analytical argument about where “Yo Dawg, I heard you like X” meme gets its meaning, how it works, and why it caught on among internet users. I recommend watching for an example of how to construct a rhetorical analysis. Even though the presenter here does not use the key terms of a rhetorical situation, as you are expected to do in your essays, he offers a rhetorical analysis nonetheless because he identifies the key elements of the applicable exigences, the background knowledge involved in being its audience, assumptions about the internet and memes the make the meme relevant and timely (related to context, audience, constraints), how insiders and outsiders are identified in the meme audience through its use, and the necessary constraint of its basic formal structure, “You dawg, I heard you like X….” Your analysis, of Wang’s or Crawford’s presentation, or of “Critical Questions for Big Data,” is intended to be something like a “Know Your Meme” episode in that you will explain how the author produces a convincing perspective–that is, identify the intended effects (exigence) and the choices made to produce or achieve those intended effects–choices which are categorized according to the elements of a rhetorical situation.

Please watch:

Lessons this week are being posted as they are made. This week, you are revising your zero draft. Many of you are going to need to write more, and you may even wonder what else there may be to write. That’s not uncommon. The Rhetorical Analysis is an exercise in learning to find material to write about when it seems like there isn’t much to write about. I’ve given you a lot of options, but as you focus on the more specific points of finding a thesis and organizing your ideas you will uncover ways to produce more interpretive insights. Let’s start with working through the elements of an analytical thesis statement. Watch the following video and spend about 10 minutes working on your thesis to integrate the material covered in the lesson.

Notice:

The focused essays will be accepted for full credit regardless of their current condition as drafts (full, partial, outline, etc.). The final draft will be graded according to the expectations listed in the Overview and the Final Draft documents. Incomplete or failed final drafts will be need to be rewritten.

Lesson 5.1: Thesis statements!

Lesson 5.2: Developing your Paragraphs, a remote workshop.

Week Four

Single lesson this week: Essay 1 Revision.

Watch the video and complete the activities assigned at the end of the video:

Guideline for pre-revision completion of your Zero Draft for Essay 1

 

Discussion assignment: After reading the “viral argument” pages from Going Viral, find and link an example of a viral argument and an example of a meme within a discussion post in a comment to this week. Use this example to think through and explain the authors’ definition of a viral argument as well as the distinction they draw between a viral argument and a meme. Post your answer in a comment to this post.

 

 

Week Three

NEWS

Please watch my recap of Week Two, linked here, before meeting on Wednesday morning.

Remember: due to Labor Day, Wednesdays workshops will be combined. Groups A and C will meet at 8 am and groups B and D will meet at 9:10 am.

There will be no class meeting at 8:40, but I will be in the Zoom room and available to answer any questions.

What exactly do you do this week? Complete steps 1-7 by Wednesday 11:59 p.m. Then, complete steps 8-9in time to share your zero draft in Workshop 3, next week.

  1. Read: “How to Email your Professor (without being annoying AF).” This is important, because I’ve learned from several emails that students do not know this stuff, and it will make things hard for you with other professors.
  2. Read: “Critical Questions for Big Data” sections 1-6 (665-676)
  3. Don’t do: The “extra credit” assignment has been removed.
  4. Lesson 3.1: Special Announcement and suggested viewing (step 10, below).
  5. “In this class I will be asking you to try and find your style. I want you to use your slang, your sentence structures, your poetry, your many languages, your very self in your writing. In order to be better writers, we first have to know how we relate to our writing, how our writing develops from our very bodies and lives. But know not all professors are like me. They will ask you to write a certain way, judge your work according to certain rules, and demand you speak in intellectually sophisticated ways — whatever these things even mean. Your success, the grade or the job, depends on molding yourself to the criteria and standards they give to you, unfortunately. Going forward, please be aware of this when you are in these other classroom spaces. As much as I hate to say it: it is what is — for now.” Click here to read more or move on to complete lesson 3.2, on linguistic justice and writing.
  6. Lesson 3.2:  Toward Linguistic Justice
  7. Due Wednesday (11:59pm): Complete lesson 3.2 and complete process writing in the questions and discussion sections inside of the Ted Ed lesson. You will need to log in to Ted Ed in order to post your process writing.
  8. Read: Essay 1 Overview
  9. Homework for your next workshop: Essay 1 Zero Draft ** Read this assignment carefully. Be aware that your zero draft is not a formal draft, and a formal draft would be a failed zero draft.** You are invited to continue reflecting on the Ted Ed lesson, where it seems relevant to your rhetorical analysis, in your essay draft.
  10. Helpful resource: Edited annotations of selections from “Critical Questions” that may help you understand key passages.
  11. Suggested viewing–completely optional but highly recommended for everyone: I Am Not Your Negro, Raoul Peck’s documentary on James Baldwin can be accessed on Kanopy through QC library. 

Week Two

What are you supposed to do this week?

First, turn in your revised workshop assignment here:  Turn in

==The link to turn in your workshop assignments, in general, is in the assignment schedule, linked on the Course Schedule page of this course site. Check out the pages in the menu above. 

Next, follow steps 1-5. They are ordered for your benefit. All work except homework for workshop is intended to be completed before the end of the week. Usually that deadline is Wednesday night, but this week it has been extended to Friday night. Step 6, the homework, is to be completed in time to share in your group’s workshop next week. This is the workflow that class will follow each week for the semester. 

For the analysis assignment: please use the link corresponding to your group, below. The forms have been fixed and your analysis should go through. 

  1. Read: “Critical Questions for Big Data” Introduction (pages 662-665 top)

Complete the analysis form for your group (due Wednesday by 11:59pm) –EXTENDED TO FRIDAY NIGHT DUE TO TECHNICAL PROBLEMS

Group A form

Group B form

Group C form

Group D form

2. Watch: “Algorithmic Illusions.”Kate Crawford, see video embedded in this article. (video is roughly 17 minutes).

3. Lesson 2.1: Harvey’s “Elements of the Academic Essay.” <–See handout linked there <-and watch video here:

 

Complete assignment described at end of video in the comments section to this post.

I will post a second video with the assignment for you to complete NEXT WEEK.

4. Lesson 2.2: Reading rhetorically: between saying and doing

For workshop 2 assignment: Handout on argumentation. You will receive more instruction on argumentation in Week 3. For now, work from the handout and take notes on the questions that come up when you work this way. 

Homework: Workshop 2 assignment

Notice: I’ve added the following section in the syllabus, thanks to a student’s very helpful question. Thanks!

Late work and extensions

I take two points off process writing for late work,I do not give comments for late workshop assignments, and I take major assignments down one grade if they are turned in late after the one-day grace period. It is ultimately more important to turn in the writing–especially the major assignments, without which one cannot pass the class–than it is to turn it in on time. I grant extensions on a case-by-case basis. Please be in touch with me as soon as possible if you are struggling to finish or turn in an assignment on time.

Turning in late work

Because I do not check the turn in folders for work submitted after Sunday grading, please use this link to turn in past-due work. This way I will know to give you credit! 

Cut-off times for late work: All process writing leads to a major writing assignment . Once final drafts for that assignment are due, process writing for that unit will no longer be given credit. This policy is more than fair.

Turn in using this link: https://forms.gle/4nZqWaQ5ypXerCWC8

**UPDATE** I just saw that the major assignment descriptions that I have in my instructor’s syllabus were not in the student copy. I have added it to the syllabus document. See the table of contents to find it easily in the doc. It’s also now a page here on the site for your reference. 

Week One

Welcome!

 

Notice: To post a comment, you will need to be logged into the CUNY Commons. 

Week 1

8/26-8/30

Good morning! Now that you have attended the introductory class, you may still feel confused about what you’re supposed to do. Here is a list of next steps.

  1. Complete the mini essay assignment and turn it in right away using the prompt in the notes linked here. *Set up your GDrive account. * If you have not already done so.

2. Watch these videos:

Guide to this course

Lesson 1.2: Annotating digital texts [text] and video

Lesson 1.3: Create your coursework (archive) and (workflow) *JUST UPDATED TO INCLUDE BOTH VIDEOS)

3. Read the entire syllabus and post one question by Thursday (11:59 pm). Follow these guidelines for your question.

4. Complete the reading, Ted Ed Lesson–plus discussion posts assigned in lesson–and Video watching assignment by Friday at 11:59pm. These are listed below:

Read: “Backpacks and Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis”.  The link may lead you to the whole textbook, but you only need to read the chapter titled “Backpacks vs. Briefcases.” You don’t need to answer the questions listed in the text at the end of the chapter. Rather, follow the process in the TedEd lesson and answer questions (about both the reading and the video) within the TedEd platform. You will need to register for TedEd to post with your name.

Lesson 1.1: Rhetorical analysis  TedEd lesson

Watch: “The Human Insights Missing from Big Data.”

5.  After Friday, write your workshop 1 assignment.  Homework: Workshop 1 assignment

Phew! It seems like a lot of steps, but it will go by very quickly, and it will give us sturdy footing to write together.